The most negative comment someone told me was there could have been more detail.
Though one break with tradition was it took me about 45 minutes to go through my 22 slides. Since lab meeting is supposed to take 2 hours, my boss got up and explained one interesting problem to us.
Also I'd like to thank rampling for her talking me through some of my uncertainty yesterday.
If by some miracle someone is interested in what I did it's available here as a PDF file. As a side note the whole thing was written using LaTeX.